Final idea for movie opener

  So to start off with our short film took a lot of dedication and determination of thinking and gathering. Its about a married couple that lives together and the wife supporting the husband in his career. The husband is an F1 driver and races most of his time. As a day passes the husband packs up his things to get out of the house to go to a race. As the husband leaves the wife  makes a cup of coffee, but little does she know a huge tragedy would happen that moment she turned on the Tv. The husband crashes breaking the entire car and leading the husband to a huge concussion leading to death slowly.  The wife drinks her coffee and relaxes on the couch on her phone as her friend calls her to look at the news. The wife turns on the tv and sees the crash. Days past by and the friend shows up with bag of cookie to help the wife feel better and then the door closes and the video fades off. 

Some things that I'm currently excited about is first the acting. And some of the idea’s that me and my group have like for instance, the dramatic scenes where Im crying on the couch because of my partners death. Another thing I’m currently  excited for is meeting up with my group members to create a scene. But some things I’m worried about is not getting the editing correct and it looks unrealistic. Also, I’m a bit worried that the movie would be to boring for the audience, so that’s why I want to create current ideas to improve the film.