Peer reviews of initial Draft

For my movie opener, we collected there commentary from Group 1 and Group 2 about the technical elements. Group 1 said the sound quality of the microphone needs improvement, the lighting needs to be more dim, and the shot duration should be a bit longer. Group 2 said the shots felt rushed, the sound quality should be improved, the lighting should be more dim, and the camera movement was more erratic. To improve the sound quality, I will make sure the audio is clearer and reduce background noise during filming or editing. To fix the lighting, I will use low-key lighting to make the scene more dim and create a better mood. I will also make the shots longer to improve the pacing so the audience can understand what is happening. To fix the erratic camera movement, I will keep the camera more stable and plan smoother camera shots.